英文,下周要演讲,大家帮我看看有什么错误么?能不能帮我把语言整合的更加好呢?谢谢大家

你这个文章翻译的痕迹太明显,一看就知道是从中文翻过来的,不符合英美人的表达习惯
你可以这样写啊:
I have prepared two articles.One is entitled 'Royal wedding carriage tradition continues ' from ninemsn.The other one is just from 'Daily Telegraph' called Kate Middleton to use Diana's carriage on wedding day.

internationally 改为international countries 因为UK是名字, 而internationally是副词, 不一致.
你从头条新闻那的病句有点多, 能用中文给我解释一下你想说什么么? 是说了两件事儿还是一件? 因为标题和内容还是不一样, 如果你引用的话就可以不过要加上'单引号(国外用单引号). The headlines are 'Royal wedding carriage tradition continues' and 'Kate Middleton to use Diana's carriage on wedding day' respectively.

I chose two articles. One article is from ninemsn, which is Australia's leading online media. The other article is from the Daily Telegraph, which is a daily morning broadsheet newspaper distributed internationally including the United Kingdom The headlines are Royal wedding carriage tradition continues and Kate Middleton to use Diana's carriage on wedding day respectively.

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